Talk:HADOPI Senat petite-loi translation

« Art. L. 331-32. (Mention to the procedure in the ISP contracts)
– Les personnes dont l'activité est d'offrir un accès à des services de communication au public en ligne font figurer, dans les contrats conclus avec leurs abonnés, la mention claire et lisible des dispositions de l'article L. 336-3 et des mesures qui peuvent être prises par la commission de protection des droits ainsi que des voies de recours possibles en application des articles L. 331-24 à L. 331-31.

- Those whose business is to provide access to public online communication services must include in contracts with their subscribers, the clear and legible reference to the provisions of Article L. 336-3 and measures that can be taken by the rights protection Committee and remedies available under Articles L. L. 331-24 331-31.

IMHO, as I'm not French native, the following sentence...

« En outre, les personnes visées au premier alinéa informent périodiquement leurs abonnés des dangers du téléchargement et de la mise à disposition illicites pour la création artistique.

 "In addition, the persons referred to in the first paragraph periodically inform their customers of the dangers of downloading and the provision for illegal artistic creation.

...could be translated as (or that is the meaning I got from the original french text)...

 "In addition, the persons referred to in the first paragraph periodically inform their customers of the dangers of illegally downloading and making available the artistic creation.

Please opinions. Thanks, David

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